I have handed in four pieces of work now and they have all been returned with a middle 2:2 grade and I am very unhappy. I have looked at my feedback and all have said that my understanding of the content is there and I am gathering it is an issue with my writing style. I have written essays in secondary school for my A-Levels but my writing style has no translated well to university. Can anyone please help me out and give me some ideas on how to improve or even some pointers for basic structures that I could follow? I have a sample answer from a EU essay I recently completed that I could post for reference!